Update: Part 1 of the story is complete, 7 chapters total, but I wouldn't mind some editing from another party. If you're interested, or if you just want a sneak peak, I am willing to get you however much you want of it.
If you are interested in helping with the editing, please be honest; i promise nothing you say can hurt my feelings.
Also, don't be worried that I say 'Part 1', it will be a pretty long story with many, many parts to it.
I will likely have to post this story on BSN, as it is the only place I have access to right now. I will put up the link to it when I feel it is good enough to be read by the internet jackals