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wisekill1:
so, I made some space-art stuff.
tell me what you think of it!
http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/
that is a link to my profile
Spoiler for Hiden: http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/art/Elfried-206627824this is my first real attempt, the stars turned out very good in my opinion.
Spoiler for Hiden: http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/#/d3g3qedthis one turned out not really great, still a nice pic I think.
Spoiler for Hiden: http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/#/d3isq6vspend a whole lot of effort on this planet,I think it turned out well.
Spoiler for Hiden: http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3jnvn5for Rin's birthday!
Spoiler for Hiden: http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3jv3simade for a mini-contest but noticed after a day that it closed almost a month ago...... x|
Spoiler for Hiden: http://wisekill1.deviantart.com/art/meet-Tiem-4-227513830tried something totaly new now, hope you like it!
I hope that you can give me some feedback!
The Doctor:
Well first, your spoilers are just to links rather than images so I don't think you need the spoilers :P
In the first one I like how you've got the star flares all going the same direction, this is good many artists msss that up. Flares like that are caused by the aperture blades in a lens so will always line up. What method did you use to make them?
The second one looks like a fairly typical shooping, but well done, no seems or anything like that.
The third you did an excellent job on that planet. Very well done *applauds*
Something you might like to try: your stars are of pretty even density, try getting that to vary a bit. I would take your inspiration from shots of the milky way like this: http://www.flickr.com/photos/ngc3372/1667753442/#
Mukora:
I really like the second one. But the nebula looks... I don't know, sort of out of place. Not sure why.
Tobbs:
Really like the third one. Awesome.
wisekill1:
--- Quote from: The Doctor on June 13, 2011, 04:28:56 PM ---Well first, your spoilers are just to links rather than images so I don't think you need the spoilers :P
In the first one I like how you've got the star flares all going the same direction, this is good many artists msss that up. Flares like that are caused by the aperture blades in a lens so will always line up. What method did you use to make them?
The second one looks like a fairly typical shooping, but well done, no seems or anything like that.
The third you did an excellent job on that planet. Very well done *applauds*
Something you might like to try: your stars are of pretty even density, try getting that to vary a bit. I would take your inspiration from shots of the milky way like this: http://www.flickr.com/photos/ngc3372/1667753442/#
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yeah, i know about the spoilers, but the img tags failed a bit so just removed them...
and thanks for the advise, will try it out the next time I have alot spare time.
--- Quote from: Mukora on June 13, 2011, 04:30:59 PM ---I really like the second one. But the nebula looks... I don't know, sort of out of place. Not sure why.
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I know i was just looking for something to fill up the empty space and google gave me that picture. ;D
--- Quote from: Tobbs on June 13, 2011, 04:40:21 PM ---Really like the third one. Awesome.
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thanks! 8)
edit. that planet took 3 and a half hour to make so very happy that you like it!
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